Rough cut feedback

Use of Mise en Scene

One area too dark so not able to see/understand.

Dark areas - during attack to obscure faces and suit scene to see only the red worked and was a nice addition.

Cinematography

Great variety of camera shots.

Like the use of hand held camera (especially when beating the guy up).

Very good during the attacks. First person lead to a surprising twist.

Like the dark shots and the atmosphere it creates.

Editing

Well edited and good changes from clip to clip.

Text was difficult to see, but good transactions.

Some clips would look better if they were darker.

Sound

Appropriate music however a bit repetitive.

Liked the music.

Genre conventions

All worked