Views on final Cut Thriller

After the evaluations from our rough cut, we decided to edit more of our thriller taking the audiences criticisms to mind. we started by changing the flashbacks to black and white, this was a previous idea that we were planning to use. this decision worked out well for use as it adds to the atmosphere of our thriller but also the audience had a clear understanding that they were in the past. to make the flashback even clearer we decided to add in dates as to when the flashback happen, this emphasised his journey through life, which may explain why he does what he does.

another criticism we received about our thriller is that even though the credits worked well some were not as clear as they could be. we overcame this by moving the credits into darker areas of the scene and we also made them bolder if they were still slightly faded.

the final criticism we received from our audience was that one of our suit scenes, in which the camera tilts up the body of our Hitman, was to dark to see what was happening. to solve this we changed the brightness of the clip so that the audience can see the body but not loose the emphasis of the darkness.